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Originally Posted by _paralyzed_
Everyone has their faults. and for me at times I can be somewhat of a procrastinator. I can take longer than I want to finish projects because I can spend considerable amount of time working out all the details. I am trying to learn to focus on the essential details to produce a product that meets my own high standards while making efficient use of my time.
remove the bolded, that's just bashing yourself. Saying you take longer than you want is enough of a fault. Add the period after "faults" like I did.
nobody likes a procrastinator!
It's looking a lot better!!
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True. Don't sell yourself short in any of this. Sounds bad and wastes space on your paper anyway.
I made some quick edits, but its no where definative. Basically still some fat to cut and polishing is needed. See attached doc file.
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Originally Posted by lincpimp
I am sure Freeze has some extra "unused" material from his pants that he can donate to your cause Finn. I feel your pain but luckily I managed to buy out MC Hammer's entire wardrobe when he fell on hard times. Plenty of room in those parachute pants for me!
As for the pot and hooker comment, I would say you plagarized me, I put something in a college paper about booze and skanks... Got an A on that one. Mostly due to the fact that I cited my sources for the skanks... and included samples of the booze.
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I thought it was improper to cite yourself as a source material?
Interesting idea. I had been taught by by my dear old father and namesake to wear kilts. While warm and forgiving, they can lead to moments of impropreity. Last year my dad and I attended an airshow, vintage aircraft being a lifelong passion of his. Needless to say, stumbling upon the beautifully restored P-51D "Old Crow" parked in the field led to quite an embarrassing situation. Fortunately, the cries of the children were mostly drowned out by the screams of the women. Hehe, my old Pop, still got it after all these years.
