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Originally Posted by t-maxxracer32
made all the changes you suggested except for taking out those 2 complete paragraphs and making your statement into my own
i need to go to school and later will come home to re-look over it all
thanks alot!
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Our directiom may seem just a little bit harsh, but we have been around allot longer so we tend to be a bit more direct in our instructions. We are trying our best to help you see things from a more refined perspective. So don't get discuraged or frustrated with us older folks. With so much help in here your making progress towards better writing. It is good that you are seeing the light so to speak, but don't procrastinate any longer about reading some good books. Yes it can be difficult to make time for reading, but you really do need to make that time and do some quality reading that may help in opening your eyes and mind. It will help you greatly in being more prepared for doing this sort of thing in the future. Trust us it is one of the most important skills you will need to become successful in the field you wish to persue. Keep hammering away on this and you will reap the benefits down the road.