need some help with a writing assignment

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i never have been good at writing so an 81 was good with me.

the girl that i am dating right now is helping me with me next essay (due wednesday)

yes there were MANY corrections and little sidenotes..

heres a couple examples of things he told me..

i was unclear with a bunch of points i made
did not give enough supporting details
was not very organized
some of the things i said just didnt make any sence.

from all his corrections id say he did not like it very much but its hard to tell because i do not know how much he corrected everyone elses.... also i do not know how hard he grades his work... i may have done the worst in the entire class.. who knows.